Conjuration of the Lemon and Pins

[Feywer96]

Has anyone ever used this spell?

http://www.sacred-texts.com/pag/aradia/ara07.htm

http://www.jesterbear.com/Aradia/lemon.html

I just used it tonight actually, it being the full moon; I found it appropriate to cast upon a neighbor. I walked out far into the country in my robes and bare feet and wandered around until I found a desolate road, then I stood there and cast the spell to the Moon, orating aloud and putting the pins in. When I went home I was an ice cube because it was such a cold walk :p

I had slipped a piece of paper with the spell on it under my belt but it apparently fell out and I couldn't find it on the way back, so that was a bit iffy, but meh. Anyway, I put the lemon on his doorstep and it has quite a few black pins in it. Don't forget about a few coloured ones though.

What do you guys think about the verse of the spell? I don't like the threatening of a deity, so I omitted some parts and fitted accordingly. Thoughts?